It's because Interview with the Vampire, True Blood, Vampire Diaries, Twilight, are masterpieces next to this…
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> Watching it onscreen, I gotta applaud him, he really does look good! I see what you mean about Gawin being kinda passive since he's supposed to be protected. Do you think it would be better if he was somewhere between a damsel and someone who can save himself? Just made that up, but it kinda fits. Tonkla shouldn't have died, justice for him. But damn, I just gained even more respect for Joss for looking that good on screen.
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> Watching it onscreen, I gotta applaud him, he really does look good! I see what you mean about Gawin being kinda passive since he's supposed to be protected. Do you think it would be better if he was somewhere between a damsel and someone who can save himself? Just made that up, but it kinda fits. Tonkla shouldn't have died, justice for him. But damn, I just gained even more respect for Joss for looking that good on screen.
Want me to tweak it to sound even more playful or emotional?