Hey guys, did we get a single kiss out of the entire series? I’m 18 episodes and I’m super disappointed with the lack of intimacy. I wanna be sure I’m not wasting my time on a bromance.
This is probably the most innapropraite place to look for a Beta Reader, but I’m at my wits end.
I’m writing a fanfic centered around You Qi and Yang Meng and I need someone to go over my rough draft. It’s an absolute must that you’ve read the Addicted books. This is because the books delve more into the secondary couple which is the main focus of my work. Also I am trying to (somewhat) loosely emulate Chai Jidan’s writing.
The first chapter is about 3k words. I need help with characterization, sentence structure, etc... constructive criticism is always welcome. :)
Oh man, this looks like a good series! I wanna watch it with eng subs, but ima go ahead and watch it without. I hope it will be subbed in the future and I can come back to watch this again.
I’m writing a fanfic centered around You Qi and Yang Meng and I need someone to go over my rough draft. It’s an absolute must that you’ve read the Addicted books. This is because the books delve more into the secondary couple which is the main focus of my work. Also I am trying to (somewhat) loosely emulate Chai Jidan’s writing.
The first chapter is about 3k words. I need help with characterization, sentence structure, etc... constructive criticism is always welcome. :)
Reply/contact me if intestested.