You are really too harsh in your review of the article here. Why didn't you contact a moderator with your concerns…
Yes, it was by Patricia.
I'm glad you didn't see her comments. They were rude and uncalled for. No one is a born writer. It's something you learn over time and with practice. Everyone makes mistakes and to receive constructive criticism is fine but there's no sense in bashing a writer, especially a new one, just because you're more experienced.
I hope that you keep writing and don't let that person get you down.
Only Side by Side with You..... the flashbacks were horrible. Every episode had about 20 minutes worth. It got to a point that I would fast-forward through them so I could stay interested in the drama.
You are really too harsh in your review of the article here. Why didn't you contact a moderator with your concerns on this person's writing and research abilities instead of posting it here? It seems like you get some sort of sick pleasure calling people out in an open forum over minor things. If you can do so much better then get off your high horse and start writing articles for MDL yourself.
I'm sure that you'll come back with something about how you're giving constructive criticism or that you're trying to make this person a better writer but honestly, you sound like a complete bitch about it. If the writer read even half of your rambling then consider yourself lucky. I have lost precious minutes of my life doing so. If you were trying to inspire them in some crazy, convoluted way believe me when I say that you didn't.
By the way, you stated 'Another mistake 'On June 26, 2006...' ought to be 'on the 26 of June', and that's incorrect. It would be 'on the 26th of June'; but don't worry, I wont mention anymore mistakes. It's pointless.
I'm glad you didn't see her comments. They were rude and uncalled for. No one is a born writer. It's something you learn over time and with practice. Everyone makes mistakes and to receive constructive criticism is fine but there's no sense in bashing a writer, especially a new one, just because you're more experienced.
I hope that you keep writing and don't let that person get you down.
I'm sure that you'll come back with something about how you're giving constructive criticism or that you're trying to make this person a better writer but honestly, you sound like a complete bitch about it. If the writer read even half of your rambling then consider yourself lucky. I have lost precious minutes of my life doing so. If you were trying to inspire them in some crazy, convoluted way believe me when I say that you didn't.
By the way, you stated 'Another mistake 'On June 26, 2006...' ought to be 'on the 26 of June', and that's incorrect. It would be 'on the 26th of June'; but don't worry, I wont mention anymore mistakes. It's pointless.