
Elise:
Such a late reply but I just read the second one. I agree with what you said. Honestly, everyone was out of character and XL didn't seem like himself at all.

Elise:
Gosh, I'm so harsh critiquing fanfic lol (it's just my opinion ^^"). But it's nice to see more English fanfic writers for LYF :)
My favorite fanfic so far is still https://zhuanlan.zhihu.com/p/555723806
And I started to read this one, it's an AU with Xiao Yao (when she was still Xiao Liu) leaving days before Cang Xuan could capture her https://archiveofourown.org/works/49991599/chapters/126221257
Yes. Everyone was OOC. And the vibe was just off. I wonder if the author came from an Asian background, 'cause some of it could be due to cultural differences. That said, I appreciate people who tried - writing is not easy. And I admire people who are willing to put their work out there.
I read the second one. I just wish it was a little bit more passionate. Haha, I have such a one-track mind. But, I feel like there is a lot of passion between these two - and suppressed passion will have an amplifying effect - so once they do get together, it should be hot and tender.
I'll give the other one a shot. Always looking for good YaoLiu's fic.

nathsketch:
He definitely didn't. But the question is: do y'all think he could do the stuff we think he can do?
Asking for a friend lmao
How could you ever doubt our 9-heads demon? Aren't you writing 50 Shades of Silver. I expect big things, missy :-)

Elise:
He was FFB for hundreds of years before he met XY and was known to be a playboy. He visited those dance halls and brothels soooo....... yes, he knows how to do that stuff.
Um-hum! Plus, we know that he has discipline and diligence (look at the way he trained the resistance army), so he would have practice until he got it right ;-)
It's a sad life I lead, that I'm speculating on fictional characters' sex life. Lol