I think the script is good, but there is scope to develop a few more plots in the last episodes. When it comes to the second male lead, he doesn’t deserve that girl, and it feels like the monitor is being forced to love her. She doesn’t deserve him. At the very least, you could have made him a partner to the other girl who has been loving and supporting him fairly since Class 1 (Xie Yu Han); that would have been a much better plot.
She claimed that she loved him, but she used the monitor for her own benefit. Later, in Germany, she is with another guy—how could she do that? Even after all this, how could you make them partners again in the end? She didn’t change even after so many chances. At least you could have shown their breakup clearly, with no chance of a patch-up, and then let the monitor be with his friend(Xie Yu Han character). Even if he had remained single, it would have been better than showing him being with her.
She claimed that she loved him, but she used the monitor for her own benefit. Later, in Germany, she is with another guy—how could she do that? Even after all this, how could you make them partners again in the end? She didn’t change even after so many chances. At least you could have shown their breakup clearly, with no chance of a patch-up, and then let the monitor be with his friend(Xie Yu Han character). Even if he had remained single, it would have been better than showing him being with her.
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