Foolescent

Like when the bodyguard sent them to investigate the MC and they find stuff that you just can't know like that she was locked up on her step sister's birthday, nobody's going to call the cops on them for doing all that? And let's not even mention those recordings from the security cameras that captured MC rescuing that cat when they were in a backyard, far from the building .

I really liked it, especially the ending, though somethings didn't really make sense.

Have you considered going to a therapist instead? He gave her 99 lashes, and when she was getting married he threatened with just ☠️ everyone if she didn't go with him. Then he used her common sense (not being ok with him hurting himself) against her, cuz in his mind it meant that she loved him and not that she just doesn't want to see someone hurting themselves.