JH is acting downright strange. Heart palpitations at that level? That’s not just emotional—it’s physiological.…
Your use of the word unsitting is interesting. I had to look it up- “Unsitting: This is an obsolete word that means "not sitting well" or "unbecoming". It is very rarely used today.”
Unseemly is commonly used more today. I like your writing and often find it elevates my thoughts on scenes and characters.
Oh my. You overthink I think. I actually had forgotten the Scorpions did that song. Now it’s in my head.
You called her “ that Weird Hairdo monster” Her hair reminds me of a scorpion’s tail. Scorpion Tail Head doesn’t sound as good as Scorpion Butthead to me .
Sorry I inferred you might know what I was thinking.
I generally agree with your comments here and other places. Keep on rocking.
Did today’s episode (6) propel the story at all today? It felt like a child’s finger painting. Finger painting starts off well but usually ends up with a brown undistinguishable mess.
Unseemly is commonly used more today.
I like your writing and often find it elevates my thoughts on scenes and characters.
I actually had forgotten the Scorpions did that song. Now it’s in my head.
You called her “ that Weird Hairdo monster”
Her hair reminds me of a scorpion’s tail. Scorpion Tail Head doesn’t sound as good as Scorpion Butthead to me .
Sorry I inferred you might know what I was thinking.
I generally agree with your comments here and other places. Keep on rocking.
Well I finally finished it and gave it 8.5/10.
I know you know what I mean.
You think he’s gone bad for real?
In the warehouse I heard all the thuds and thwacks and wacks and whomps. And on the street definitely it was a metal baseball bat.
It felt like a child’s finger painting. Finger painting starts off well but usually ends up with a brown undistinguishable mess.