Replying to MyBallsAreHuge • Nov 8, 2023
Title Flower of Evil
The biggest flaw for me was the writing. The quality was not consistent and it dropped alot in the second half.…
Thank you! Finally someone pointing out how inconsistent the plot was occasionally. I can suspend my disbelief when it comes to the FL giving mouth to mouth under water but if the story tells me the ML can't emote and then he cries all the time, then they are changing the story however it's convenient without considering the audience.