Replying to Fim • May 28, 2022
Title Love in Between
Poor storytelling, often illogical. The plot is suddenly revealed using the writer's mind, not the character's.There…
Another hole, when they got to the Desert Palace to see the Empress, the ML's "blindness" just all of a sudden is gone and NOBODY notices or questions it (Yes, the FL noticed but I am referring to the Empress who saw the ML blind during the performance and the other people.). I don't know if I missed something or if it is really like that.
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