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The story has an incredible premise, and both the main character (MC) and the female main character (FMC) are truly captivating. They have so much potential to shine throughout the narrative, but it seems like they often end up overshadowed by the other couples in the story. Instead of feeling like the focus is primarily on them, I find myself more intrigued by the side characters and their relationships.

While I appreciate how rich and diverse the cast is, it can be overwhelming at times. There are so many subplots and side stories happening simultaneously that it detracts from the central storyline. I can't help but feel that the pacing is inconsistent; at certain moments, the story seems to drag on, while at other times, it rushes through important developments.

I genuinely love the core couple, but I wish the narrative would give them more space to breathe and develop fully. It would be great to see them take center stage without constantly having to compete for attention with the other characters. Balancing the interactions and stories of the side characters with the main plot could elevate the overall experience and keep readers consistently engaged with the primary love story.