On The Long Ballad • May 13, 2021
Title The Long Ballad
I agree that the personal growth and dynamics of the characters is explored extensively for some, but where the main couple is concerned this is largely stagnant....the 2nd main couple has greater depth with noticeable development of insight and maturity. The relationship between the FL and her uncle is not badly displayed either. However I comment on the romantic element as this is tagged as a romance, which is misleading- certainly between the main couple. I am actually a fan of the FL and her contribution in the Flame's Daughter was far more enjoyable and memorable.