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this feels like a montage of short scenes rather than a fully written story
I'd like to write something profound, like, " I wish the character's communicated better!" but the main problem of the story is that they don't talk, at all. 90% of the conversation is carried by the boss who keeps hitting on his coworker. the co-worker rarely replies to him and even when he says no to something it is ignored by the boss. this whole set up is just a sexual harassment hr report waiting to happen.
I'd like to write something profound, like, " I wish the character's communicated better!" but the main problem of the story is that they don't talk, at all. 90% of the conversation is carried by the boss who keeps hitting on his coworker. the co-worker rarely replies to him and even when he says no to something it is ignored by the boss. this whole set up is just a sexual harassment hr report waiting to happen.
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