An ad that hints at a good potential series
Ad value: 8- you get food this beautiful and delivery people this beautiful? Almost certainly not, but highly effective ad.
Story idea: 8 - there are multiple ideas that could make an interesting 10 episode series
Story continuity: 3 the ad is more concerned about images than flow and continuity
Acting: 8.5 the four actors show they would shine in a well-scripted and directed full show. Fourth
has always been good- the other three appear markedly improved from the last things I saw them in.
Of course, this is only 12 minutes total- takes more energy and focus for full series- but I believe!
Direction: lots of glossy panoramas. Everything looks gorgeous- which means lighting and cinematrography on crew is
skilled. Some shots of cars expose how slow they are actually going.
Check this out and if you like it- write GMMTV for full series. And insist on an actual salary for screenwriters. And
no wiping off food off your intended love's lips, no slow mos on drink sponsors and no
loud "comical" noises. Now I am truly in dreamland.......
Story idea: 8 - there are multiple ideas that could make an interesting 10 episode series
Story continuity: 3 the ad is more concerned about images than flow and continuity
Acting: 8.5 the four actors show they would shine in a well-scripted and directed full show. Fourth
has always been good- the other three appear markedly improved from the last things I saw them in.
Of course, this is only 12 minutes total- takes more energy and focus for full series- but I believe!
Direction: lots of glossy panoramas. Everything looks gorgeous- which means lighting and cinematrography on crew is
skilled. Some shots of cars expose how slow they are actually going.
Check this out and if you like it- write GMMTV for full series. And insist on an actual salary for screenwriters. And
no wiping off food off your intended love's lips, no slow mos on drink sponsors and no
loud "comical" noises. Now I am truly in dreamland.......
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