DonnaK2O

The story has a good foundation, but the problem, in my opinion, is mainly the protagonists. They're so generic they could be supporting characters or extras. They don't have a strong personality or any major moments, and that wouldn't be a problem... But it is, because being a series, viewers need to be anxious for the next episodes, sigh, scream, laugh, get emotional, but none of that happens. It was extremely difficult for me to finish this GL, I had to put it on 1.5 (something I practically never do, I hate having to subject myself to that), because the plot simply didn't move you, and the protagonists don't captivate you or evoke any kind of emotion. I kept waiting for the moment when I would feel something, but that moment never came. Even the kiss and their first time didn't move me at all, because the romance is so poorly developed (basically, they meet three times, say a few sentences, and are already "in love"), so I didn't even have time to get to know them properly or root for them. The scenes with the toothbrush made me so embarrassed that I almost gave up watching.