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From the very beginning, this drama showed zero quality in writing. The FL is a modern martial artist who suddenly enters the body of a girl (transmigration , of course!!) about to be killed by bandits. They take her to their disgusting old leader, and she kills him effortlessly. She even beats up the whole gang and becomes their boss ...... fine, I accepted that.
But what made absolutely no sense to me was what came after.
How can a woman who defeated ten armed men in a breathe, suddenly fail to handle the leader’s useless, brainless daughter? This bimbo creates mess after mess, yet the FL keeps forgiving her like she’s some saint with selective memory. It’s as if the writer forgot she’s a martial artist whenever the plot needed extra chaos.
By the end, this “strong” FL becomes a complete liability because of poor writing and zero logic.
Honestly, a classic example of limited creativity. Total disappointment.
But what made absolutely no sense to me was what came after.
How can a woman who defeated ten armed men in a breathe, suddenly fail to handle the leader’s useless, brainless daughter? This bimbo creates mess after mess, yet the FL keeps forgiving her like she’s some saint with selective memory. It’s as if the writer forgot she’s a martial artist whenever the plot needed extra chaos.
By the end, this “strong” FL becomes a complete liability because of poor writing and zero logic.
Honestly, a classic example of limited creativity. Total disappointment.
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