Kaptan

It's been a long time since I watched it. When I made my comment, I made a general comment immediately after watching it. I didn't make a comment like this happened in this episode. That's why I don't remember. However, in my opinion, there were a lot of faults, but overall it was a very good series. I focused on the whole and evaluated it that way.

He was a good actor, whom I liked very much. I used to call him My Mister. It was also my favorite series. It stuck with me. It's sad that he died at such a young age. I offer my condolences to his loved ones.

I'm not talking about that, I'm not talking about why the King didn't tell the Eunuch that they were looking for the princess because of the accusation that the Prince was rebelling, or why the Eunuch even asked a soldier; what are you looking for? what are you doing? They would say that they were looking for the princess. I don't understand why such an unlikely path was followed. In fact, the scriptwriter wrote and drew many wrong, erroneous and illogical things in this series from the very beginning, and the actors played them. The director also directed. The actors are good, the director is good, otherwise the scriptwriter is very bad. It made me angry.

O.K.

The series is over, but I just watched the 38th episode. Once again, I was left alone with a screenwriter's game. So he didn't show us a proper episode. This time the prince is looking for the kidnapped princess. The king and his followers, including the prime minister, think he is rebelling. Because the prince had all the doors closed. He took the palace soldier with him and went to search. The king calls the prince to find out what happened, but the prince does not go and does not say why. The king is stupid, his eunuch is stupider than him. If a guard there asks the soldier, what are you looking for? what are you doing? They would say, "We are looking for the princess." So we have a screenwriter who treats the audience like idiots. Mashallah, he is starting a rebellion over this incident, but neither the prince nor the eunuch will say what happened. Secret, Secret. Government secret. They wander around with pictures in their hands, but no one knows what they are looking for. My God, you are great. Grant this screenwriter some wisdom. It drove me crazy while watching it again.

In this series, there were many mistakes and mistakes made by the screenwriter, such as illogicality and "I did it". Fortunately, the cast is very good and the director is successful, otherwise the maximum rating would be 5. It was a scenario full of so many mistakes. It was endless. It was the screenwriter's first script anyway. I think it was beyond awful.

I understand.

I don't criticize without saying what's wrong. You didn't read my comment at all. I wrote what happened there as a fill-in-the-blank. Watch the 28th episode and tell me an activation related to the story and I will apologize to you. No. He just came and met with the King. The rest is empty. Don't make wrong comments before watching and reading my comments. Words like where it was were very wrong. If you are defending the screenwriter. You also tell him what he did right. I'm saying this for that section. And I say you are right. You criticized me from the beginning, without reading or understanding. This is not unique to this series. However, there are many empty episodes like this in this series. If the department is going to be filled with soldiers drinking alcohol and chatting nonsense, I should start writing a script. Many people like you won't mind anyway. There may be people who ask what the topic was. And those who say where were we? Or what were we actually watching? What was the purpose of this series, the path it showed us, what we learned. I learned empty conversation. I threw the ball and caught it. When I was bored, I wandered around the countryside. I even made peace with my lover on and off. Even the Prime Minister's daughter from his concubine started to harass the Prime Minister. We'll have a new villain. You know, a kind, helpful, good person suddenly turns into a murdering monster. The Prime Minister also looks at him and smiles. I think he gives permission. From the helpless stepchild. The screenwriter who created a heroic personality is doing this now. The gossipy second brother is almost becoming emperor, he's becoming so skilled. So the screenwriter changes characters. We were confused which character to believe. After making our heroic girl, Lieutenant He, look helpless. Now, when he suddenly appeared before the emperor, he was announced as the glorious general. Don't you see any contradiction? What is this scriptwriter or a few people doing, these scriptwriters? I'm saying it was written by one or two people who don't know about each other. It's such a twisted scenario and some parts are really empty. If you prove to me the fullness of chapter 28, I will apologize to you. But please watch it first and then read my comment.

I agree. I agree the same. I have been criticizing this issue for a long time. My criticisms did not find much response. Some of my friends chose not to believe me and criticize me even though I stated the mistakes, errors, contradictions and empty sections with proof. It made me happy to see someone like you who thinks the same way as me. Thank you.

Yes, it is done a lot. There are many mistakes. If different people write differently, it's more obvious. Because while you're watching the beautiful aspects, suddenly very stupid things happen. So, all this is due to the difference in screenwriters. It never occurred to me. Thank you.

I agree with your opinion. It's starting to happen more in Chinese dramas these days. There is a problem with the scriptwriters.

I find the scriptwriter incompetent or malicious. I believe he did some things on purpose. If he is doing it consciously, there is only one explanation for this, and that is to complete his 40-episode screenwriting contract. In one way or another. For him, it doesn't matter whether it was good, bad, wrong or empty. It fits his mind. I think he doesn't care about the audience or keeping the script more solid.

Episode 28 was a very empty episode. I was criticized a lot here when I talked about the mistakes, errors and emptiness of the scriptwriter. Those who watched this episode said, "What did I watch?" The queen's banquet, games, dancing, idle talk. Li Ni.'s soldiers' conversations, drinking, jokes, flashbacks, a look at past events. It was just a filler-in-the-blank episode. I mean, they said the series had 40 episodes, but it should have been 30 episodes. This clever screenwriter charges extra for 10 episodes, so you should have 5 episodes. It would have been much better if it had run its course and been based on a scenario driven by a modicum of logic and reality. It's a good story. But the way it spread was not fiction. My opinion.

If you are watching the series, you should ask. Why did Lieutenant He, whom you describe as a hero, become helpless? Suddenly, his helpless stepson, who had not been seen for months, suddenly appeared and commanded the soldiers and tied them to himself. We learn in the next chapter. Fascinated. However, the character of Lieutenant He was introduced as a hero. The fighter fights alongside the warrior, the soldier, and has led and won many battles. The soldier knows and loves himself. Did he suddenly stop loving? Forget the military or the generals? Was everyone stupid?
If he was a hero and a good fighter, why didn't he beat his helpless stepchild, kill him, catch him and tie him up, and then run away? If you say he couldn't do it. Then how did they reach the great general and cure him? Can't anyone who enters there enter the other place? Or is Lieutenant He unable to do this? Then why did you present this woman as a hero to us? A personality that hit everything, fought and fought with everyone suddenly became helpless. Now the new hero has become the helpless stepchild. If you ask why? How will the scriptwriter fill 40 episodes? He created a new hero. Now that hero escaped from the ambush and deceived the second prince. We will watch who else he will deceive. My friend who asks me "Aren't you watching?", are you watching but don't you see these? Do you think it's normal? I do not think so. The scriptwriter contradicted himself. The mistake continues exponentially. In the future, he will deceive the emperor, destroy the country from behind, and declare himself emperor. If you watch like this, this will be the end. Good luck watching it with the scriptwriter. I am watching.

That's the only thing I agreed with. Also, in the next chapter, I learned that the soldiers there were fascinated. That's why I understood that they were against it. However, what I really want to say is that the mistakes continue. And it continues exponentially in the following chapters. I explained this above. It's in the answers I gave to other friends. If you read, the main thing I want to tell you is the mistake and I objected to it continuing. I found it wrong. It's about the characters. The screenwriter contradicts himself with the characters he created. The editing is wrong. If you read it, you will understand.

I agree with what you said. I realized this in the following section. However, as the scriptwriter dictates to us, Lieutenant He or he is a hero. He is a very good fighter, a swordsman, and can fight head to head with men and even Li Ni. He's a very good soldier. The military follows him. wins victories. While this is the case, the stepchild is a helpless and sick person. He is someone who acts completely dependent on Lieutenant He. That's how he introduced it. It was said that this stepchild is dead. He was gone for months. He came suddenly and changed everything that same day. This means that the Lieutenant He character that the scriptwriter introduced to us has emerged as a completely helpless character that never existed. Why doesn't he tackle his stepchild when they are alone? Beat or kill. Or catch and tie. You will say that he cannot do it, his father is in danger. Here's the problem anyway. He knows this. Even though he knows that your stepchild has done everything, he doesn't object. If he was afraid that he would kill his father, I think he should have killed that person. The Lieutenant character that the screenwriter introduced to us could do this. He couldn't. He became helpless. You will say that he couldn't do it anyway. Well then, how did the assistant woman reach the Great General and save the man from the poison? He healed. He's in and out. For some reason, Lieutenant He cannot come out or come to him. Isn't this a contradiction? The wrong constructions of the screenwriter become more and more wrong in the following episodes. Everyone is dying, all the heroes, generals, governors are leaving one by one. The helpless stepchild, on the other hand, escapes from the ambush and continues to deceive everyone he comes across. Do you think it's believable? I think it's wrong. But how will he fill 40 episodes? He will fill the mistakes by multiplying them and making the helpless a hero. I found it wrong. It ruined the reliability and beauty of the series. I would give 9 points. I don't know if I would give it a 6 now. Still watching.

I watched it afterwards. I learned some things. But it does not answer what I fundamentally object to. I explained it at length to my friends above. If you read it, I told you what I found wrong there. Showing our daughter, who was attributed as a hero from the beginning, as helpless, and heroizing the stepchild who is shown as helpless and sick. Great generals and governors were killed. The people who did these are our war-winning heroes, our daughter Lieutenant O and Li Ni. So what happened now that the hero changed? He even went and deceived the second prince. You will see that in the other episodes, there will be no man left that he will not deceive, and he will even reach the level of overthrowing the government. How is it? If you think it's normal, I don't think it's either. I think the scriptwriter's fiction is wrong, I don't agree with you. You may not agree with me either. I am making my statement. You criticize without doing it. This is my opinion.

You are reasonable again. Yes, I agree that the soldier didn't know she was his daughter. In fact, in the next episode, it is seen that those soldiers are fascinated, let alone not knowing. I agree there. But what I really want to say is how they fascinated all the soldiers. Secondly, how is it that our fighter, strategist, heroic daughter is put in this situation against her sick and helpless stepchild? She can't beat that stepchild when they're alone. She can't beat she. He can't even kill her. She can't take prisoners. At least tie it up. Supposedly, this girl is described by the scriptwriter as a hero, she is the one who fights with the soldiers at the front, she is a kung fu master, she competes with Li Ni in the use of swords and arrows, she is good enough to compete with him. The other one was bad too. Why couldn't he do anything to her? Notice I'm saying this when I'm alone. Don't say it's because he thinks about his father. He takes the man and ties him up. Or takes him captive. Don't say you can't do it. Since they entered his father's room and treated him, this must be happening anyway. Why didn't he? Not done. I think the screenwriter should have taken these into consideration, too. I criticized him for not taking it. Now he is correcting these in the following chapters. Which goes on and on and on. Now that helpless stepchild escapes the ambush. He goes and deceives the second prince. The man was transformed from helplessness to heroism into a creature that makes everyone miserable. I understand the scriptwriter. How will he fill 40 episodes? Great generals, governors, famous warriors were killed. This helpless stepchild took their place. I found it ridiculous. Wrong construction in my opinion.

We understand that no soldier knows or cares about our daughter, who is presented as a hero, who is an expert in fighting, a master of strategy, and who fights on the front lines with her soldiers in place of the sick person called her brother, and the generals do not believe her. Suddenly, everyone swears allegiance to the stepchild who has not been seen for months. Do you think it's believable? I think no. I don't agree with you.
However, in the next chapter, we understand that the soldiers there were fascinated, and this was understood thanks to the general's awakening and resistance. Why didn't our daughter defeat the helpless stepchild with her talent when they were alone? Or couldn't? She took no prisoners. Or he didn't kill. So if we get into it, we won't be able to get out. This leaves a lot of space. Section extension efforts. You say the following sections. Those who did this were ambushed, but the stepson escaped again and is now provoking the second prince. What's this? This stepchild is an army on his own. He deceives everyone he meets. It is eaten. He ambushes. It is incapacitating. All heroes. Those who defeated armies and conquered countries are shown as incapable. Don't do it. Also, don't give me advice to watch the next episode. If a mistake continues, it will continue exponentially. That's how it folds. My opinion. Scenario mistakes made by the screenwriter to lengthen the episodes. Of course, he will also fill 40 episodes, it is impossible not to agree with him. However, you make one person seem too superior. You also belittle those you portray as superior. He contradicts himself. Look, even the Great Generals have gone astray. But a helpless, sickly stepchild challenges everyone. No matter how you look at it, this stepchild turns into a hero created by mistake. I think it's a misconstruction.
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The event I described above will be Episode 22. We learn in the 23rd episode that the soldiers of the Cui Army and the two commanders who were shown as examples were fascinated. Because of their magic, the soldier swears allegiance to the stepson. They don't even listen to the Great General. Ultimately, the stepson escaped, thanks to the soldiers of the tribe who cast spells. Now I'm asking why the stepson didn't kill the father, his daughter, and Lini with the archers when he had the chance. He couldn't kill him.
My second question is that this tribal state has such a talent. He defeats everyone by using magic. Why couldn't they become a Kingdom, an Empire, and defeat all the armies? They could not own all the lands. You know what they say, "If your bald had medicine, he would put it on his head." that account. I think the nonsense continues. No, there was no screenwriter. You entered it wrong, your mistake continues.
For example, the girl was a complete swordsman, she was much more advanced than this stepson in swordsmanship and Kung Fu. Even the man's helplessness was in question. He was sick. Has he improved now, but his Kung Fu has reached its peak in 1 month? Does he no longer know any rivals in swordsmanship? So the girl had to defeat him hundreds of times with the character structure that the scriptwriter introduced to us. He might even kill them a few times when they were alone. Let him take it down. None of them did. Our daughter has become helpless. Okay, he thinks about dad. He even thinks he killed his father. He shakes your hand. If he sticks two, the man will be destroyed. The character that the scriptwriter introduced to us was such a person. He was fighting head to head with Li Ni. What happened, screenwriter? Tell us about it.