Excuse me, but I believe her article is perfect as it is. This is not a grammar class or English 101. If the article was edited and approved by staff that means it is good enough to be published.
I don't understand the need to criticize her writing style, "this is not an article, is an opinion piece" well it was published as an editorial and here in MDL we call everything published "articles". If you really wanted to give constructive criticism you could have dmed her your opinion along with pointers on how to improve, and not just appear as a judgy a-hole as you do now.
There are tons of pieces written here, many by people who speak english as a second or third language, these ARTICLES are written by amateurs not by professionals, so your opinion on it is rather unwanted I believe.
Some kindness could go a long way, you should refrain from tarnishing someone's happiness like this.
She finds out he is not her brother around ep 15 but she starts falling for him before that because he is very…
No, is not a long separation, she finds out his manipulations and gets angry (it is a little frustrating but it is only for like 2 eps) he lets her leave because he really loves her but even though she's angry he still keeps visiting and taking her away he never gets angry at her and just lets her be. I'm on ep 36 so I am not sure of the ending yet
When does Chun Hua find out that Qiu Yue is not her brother?? When does she start falling for Qiu Yue?? Spoilers…
She finds out he is not her brother around ep 15 but she starts falling for him before that because he is very naughty and kisses her A LOT. At first she sticks to the SML because she thinks he is her soul mate, she was told the first person she sees when she wakes up is her soulmate but she doesnt remember that she saw QY first, she remembers after falling for him.
Love this article! It's really solid advice, well written and has great points! Especially the trying new things…
Thank you for reading! I felt necessary to mention it since for me is a huge red flag if I can't focus on a simple story or just can't muster the energy to even open my laptop and watch an episode. I know many others in this community might be in the same situation as well. I was afraid of going to deep into the subject, but I'm so happy it was the right decision to write about it.
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I don't understand the need to criticize her writing style, "this is not an article, is an opinion piece" well it was published as an editorial and here in MDL we call everything published "articles". If you really wanted to give constructive criticism you could have dmed her your opinion along with pointers on how to improve, and not just appear as a judgy a-hole as you do now.
There are tons of pieces written here, many by people who speak english as a second or third language, these ARTICLES are written by amateurs not by professionals, so your opinion on it is rather unwanted I believe.
Some kindness could go a long way, you should refrain from tarnishing someone's happiness like this.
Wanna see pics?
I know many others in this community might be in the same situation as well. I was afraid of going to deep into the subject, but I'm so happy it was the right decision to write about it.
Yes, awareness is always welcomed!