Critica sin filtro

Tal vez Mañana begins with a strong premise, but the narrative collapses under its own structure. The drama splits itself between past and present, jumping constantly without letting either timeline breathe. Instead of complementing each other, both stories compete for attention — a clear sign that the writer doesn’t trust the present-day plot to stand on its own.

The result is emotional detachment: fragmented pacing, interrupted scenes, and nostalgia used as a shortcut rather than a consequence of character growth. When memories overshadow the actual story this early, it’s not a stylistic choice; it’s a structural weakness.
The concept is solid.
The execution, especially the narrative architecture, is not.