The Proper Way to Write Love Episode 1
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pretty sure this was a big misunderstanding or Natsuo inability to communicate his true feelings as teens. idk if now he recognized Hiroshi & saw this as a 2nd chance to get what he couldn't, when they were students. or he is just attracted to Hiroshi - time will tell. ****************************************************************************************************************but it is clear that Hiroshi didn't read the situation right & assumed that Natsuo the delinquent was just toying with him. he didn't understand that Natsuo genuinely fell for him. ***********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************maybe Natsuo's family was bad/sad & as a consequence he was scared or didn't know how to convey his true feelings, maybe he had a learning disability something that handicapped him further.. maybe that & who he was was gender wise, let alone the school with other delinquents - he couldn't come out & knew it would be safeer to just be around Hiroshi, pestering him (like the kid that pulls the hair of the girl he likes) it's something that's better then nothing. & sadly Hiroshi was so used to getting bullied in that school, that he just assumed that Natsuo was just another bully that found a new way to bully him. ******************************************************************************************************************************************************i still don't get what we saw at the start, was Hiroshi trying to force himself on Natsuo, his way of getting even for all the bullying?!? that would be bad - cause Natsuo's immature & a goofball but he isn't mean - never was (ok when he lied to his friends on the roof, that was bad) still he doesn't deserve to get SA - hope i am wrong. ********************************************& just throwing this out there is Natsuo did something similar to Hiroshi when they were teens - two wrongs don't make a right. y'all adults - talk it out or curse him out, threaten to go to the cops - anything but try to do to him what he did to u.
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thank god this is over... was bored out of my mind ( even though Ji Won showed growth in this last ep & we got that extra long sex scene. still, all the cuddly, happily ever after's don't make up for the mess it was until now. this a one off & am kinda appreciative that there wasn't a 2nd couple. that it was left open for them. given what was done with the 1ts couple, i can only guess how that plot would develop only to give me a headache. ********************************************************************Seung Jin was my favorite character & liked Jeong U - Eun O for some reason couldn't make-up my mind if i liked him or now. but the one character that i really disliked was Ji Won. oh well - the end
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Ji Won is doing my head in - he is so freakin cringe i can't. & his "oh really" makes me wanna punch something. now that at the end there is some kind of progress maybe just maybe he will stop acting like pushover. or ima give up cause i just can't with his personality & behavior
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this is short & yet it takes me ages to finish an ep OMG but the 2nd hand cringe i killing me. idk why i just can't enjoy this - Ji Won keeps putting his foot in it & the way he acts all docile & introverted just standing around letting Jeong U play with him, like he was a mouse & Jeong U the cat is just uncomfortable to watch. idk how i am gonna push through this & reach the end of this BL ugh
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Hua Yong is crazy, but what's new... dude got the memory of a gold-fish? the doctor just asked Sheng if he was sexually active & Hua Yong was the one to respond. the doctor assumed that Sheng's new partner (that was compatible with him) was an omega - cause Sheng is alfa. but Hua Yong needs to go off the deep end instead of realizing the doctor assumed wrong?!? but Hua Yong wont be himself, if he doesn't have one psychotic break an ep - like OMG. ***************************************************but putting that to the side i still don't get why Sheng reaction & objection's until now have all be to the fact that Hua Yong lied to him & not that he graped him - more then once. that not a problem?!? weird - very weird **************************************Guo - omg Guo, as is i was worried about how he is gonna support himself his sick sister & being pregnant let alone a baby (when the time came) now the reason the alfa's mark the omegas is cause they supply their partner soothing hormones when they in pain. so Guo needs Shen to support him hormonally during the pregnancy. now i am worried that something will happen to Guo. ugh
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thank f*ck i finished this somehow - this was tough. it was ok i guess but i aint rewatching this ever even the romantic moments lost their appeal by the end i fast=forwarded all of it. wish i loved this but i didn't, everything felt lacking by the end & it's a pity cause there was kind-off a plot that should've been developed better. but i am the odd one out as this is a hit so what do i know. but i don't think i will bother with the 2nd season for now.. maybe when i am very bored & just want something to fill time.. who knows...
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idk why i thought this got 12 eps - but nope the end. a very sweet end too perfect if u ask me but i am a pessimist so what do i know. *********************************************************************************************************************************parents do know their children so not shocking as close & love as un Xi's parents r they spoke about how close he is too Han Tuo & that is must be more then platonic. given how scared Jun Xi about their reaction. it was the perfect ending for him. not realistic in the least. not with how he was more or less browbeat into a relationship & then to be out a proud. but it is what it is & everything worked out perfectly (too perfectly lol). *******************************************************************************also got the added mini disturbance with Zhan Wen Sen actually confessing to Han Tuo, was it needed?!? just so we will see that Jun Xi can be as jealous as Han Tuo has been??? ok - i preferred the scene between Han Tuo & his father, i am happy they cleared up the air & will renew their relationship. but that's about it - this was cute & toxic. sorry but it is what it is. *************loved the kid actors especially the kid that played Jun Xi's younger self he is beyond adorable & liked everyone else too but will never be happy by how Han Tuo gaslit Jun Xi into a relationship - but the end & this was short & fun so whatever....
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seen the trailer for the 2nd season so i know that Charlie aint dead & yet if i didn't know this the fact that Jeff isn't really effected or acting effected tells me that Charlie is alive. & guessing just me but the acting is kinda bad - from everyone - there is a ton of over acting on everyone part - like that ending like why everyone crying?!??? WTF****************************************btw i would've really appreciated know what gifts each of Chen adoptive kids has, until now we only know that Charlie can "consume" the power of others, while Jeff can see a persona future(?) when he touches them. about the rest idk. & as not everyone read the novel this was adapted from that would have been a nice touch
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well color me surprised, didn't think the wimpy, cry baby that had been eternally friend zoned would turn out to not only to be an enigma, but he was another one of Chen's adopted sons & was supposed to get Babe pregnant & take him back "home". idk how Charlie found out where Babe was, i am just glad we didn't have to watch a grape scene. ************************************these guys don't have a plan & idk what Charlie & Jeff r cooking up, but until now everything is slowly but surely going down hill. & i know i will be the odd one out but i can't stomach the lovey dovey scenes, let alone more.... Charlie acting cute is just grating at this stage & thus annoying. he still needs to kiss Babe's ass at every turn? but i aint interested in North & Sonic or Alan & Jeff flirting or more either...
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after ages finally decided to pick this back up. was getting tired of Babe's behavior & will admit that Charlie's enabling personality was starting to annoying me - cause how many time can one get kicked & still comes back for more. like plz - so yeah needed a break & now am glad cause i can see that Charlie had an agenda. he says it was to help Babe but as the psycho Tony was asking Charlie if he found Jeff am sure Charlie is working for Tony like Kenta. *******************************************but what i find interesting, Charlie is living with Jeff & dating Babe - both "kids" that Tony wants back, so he can sell them (or something - the whole wants to get u pregnant by an enigma, went over my head - that needs clarifying). so either Charlie up to no good & is a really good conman that can dupe everyone. or Tony just plain stupid. **********************************************in the previous ep (a few yrs back) i said that i don't feel sorry for Way. if anything i enjoyed his pain - but i felt so bad for him arriving at the restaurant with that bouquet of roses. *******************************************************************************this time Babe was taking advantage of Way, he knows exactly how Way feels & he also knows he doesn't feel the same way, but he didn't & doesn't care. he knows he can use Way's feelings to use him & he does without a 2nd thought. this time he an utter douche that is a bad guy not just a bad friend.
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hmmmm found it ironic that Huo Ying & the doctor survived, more so Huo Ying cause of his being poisoned for over 17 yrs & yet he's hail & hearty in the end. 2ndly i don't get how he survived when Huai Yi (Zi Ang's brother) informs Shu He, that cause he tried to escape all of the southern soldiers were executed. why Huo Ying's allowed to live?!??? ********************************also i didn't get Shu He feeling sorry about his brother the Crown Prince, he broke his fingers taking away the one thing that brought him joy & if Zi Ang hadn't interwind, Shu He would've been the Crown Princes next victim (after their father the King). the ending where they meet in the after life was cute & then the Crown Prince waiting to apologize was fine/fitting - then Shu He could be the loving, accepting brother. but while Shu He was alive, him feeling apologetic towards his brother was moronic IMO. **************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************regarding the suicide i think he did it cause he knew Zi Ang was dying & as he was truly left all alone - even without a country, he had nothing to live for. oh well - wont say i cried or even felt sad. maybe cause for a few ep's now there were a tone of hints that the outcome wouldn't be a 'happily ever after" & ironically as the lovers do meet again, it turned out to be an unconventional happily ever after - so positive ending IMO. ****************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************this was cute on a whole - wont say was hooked or am a fan that will rewatch, but i do hope to see the actors in other drama's BL of otherwise... just hope most of the newbies (all of the young actors), don't get blacklisted cause they acted in a BL.
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well well well this is turning tragic... but find it ironic that Huo Ying that was dying from the start found a 2nd life cause the doctor is hot for his ass. but he can't seem to help Zi Ang - wonder why. but i did feel bad for Zi Ang in this, yeah until now i wasn't a fan & he got worse the sec Shu He found out he was for the north. as Shu He's rejection turned him crazy & he had to posses him no matter what, & even when Shu He didn't show any sign that he was interested in rekindling their relationship Zi Ang did everything in his power to capture him & turn him into his pet. so i shouldn't really feel sad for him, but he looked so happy when he was with Shu He planning their future on the way to the night market. ******************************************** not that i blame Shu He his people were suffering not only cause they lost to the North & Zi Ang, but cause he knows that Zi Ang started the war cause he wanted him. so guilt alone wont let him accept Zi Ang.
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am sure i will be the odd one out - Han Tuo is like a bull in a china shop, the sec he decided he was gonna have Jun Xi or rather shift their relationship from friends to lovers, he basically forced Jun Xi into it.... even when he took a step back - supposedly giving him time to adjust to the new realty. his basically ghosting him, made Jun Xi feel like it was all or nothing - which had him rushing into something i doubt he was ready for, emotionally. **********************************************************************this whole relationship between them is very one sided. Han Tuo decides what, where & how & Jun Xi is dragged along confused & unsure in every step - running to catch on to what's what. ****************************************************************************************************************************************i didn't like Zhan Wen Sen as i thought he was gonna try & come between the mains, but his words rang true - he is the 1st person to tell Han Tuo that he is a selfish, self-centered ass that doesn't take Jun Xi into consideration, he wants, he get's even if that means emotionally manipulating & gaslighting Jun Xi into a corner until he gives in. ****************************************so i personally aint a happy camper - Jun Xi needs to do things at his own pace - he decides when & if he comes out of the closet. he didn't need to run after Han Tuo, apologize or placate him. but sadly he is too innocent's & big hearted, has always put others (especially Han Tuo's) needs before him own. he is a pushover & sadly there will always be someone that will take advantage of this fact.
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Hua Yong is so fake, he is still lying through his teeth & again he didn't just mark Sheng, he graped him. like will every "interaction" between them, be forced?!? & getting infused by hormones/pheromones that make u lose ur sense of self & push u into "heat" doesn't mean consent ! ************************************************************************************************but i will be the odd one out, saying this is disgusting & grape. what makes it worse is that Sheng's reaction to what is being done to him & how he is being manipulated, is also mild... if compare this situation in the regular world view - Sheng is straight & someone (a man) is basically forcing himself on him & it's fine, cause he (Hua Yong) loves him. would anyone not lose their sh*t?? idk how Sheng didn't find a way to finish him off when they were trapped in the building, during the earthquake - now it's too late. cause Hua Yong isn't just crazy he is also superhuman. so how Sheng gonna save himself?!? idk - this whole plot is doing my head in. yeah it's entertaining (if i avoid all the grape scenes - which i do), cause seeing a gaslighter at work is impressive. ***************************************************************************************************************************but i am here more for Guo & i was so happy we finally got some scenes with him, the fact he finally resigned was the cherry on top - even though i started off really disliking Shen i kinda like his tsundere (it a trope i usually really dislike) but when u got Hua Yong around, Shen doesn't seem all that bad in comparison lol ****************************************************************anyway now that Guo knows he is with child am wondering how he is gonna support himself, he's not rich & i doubt with his sister's illness, let alone that leach of a father he has a lot of savings - so yes i am very happy he has finally chosen to put his baby & as a consequence his own health before his love for Shen. but i am worried about how he is gonna survive without a well paying job.
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the doctor is like a freakin cockroach, u can't get rid of him, he keeps coming back like a bad penny & the most annoying part ,he acts like he cares so much for Shu He (which he might in his own way) as if he is trust worthy - but hard for me to buy it, when u see him with Huo Ying. who since he came clean to Shu He, has turned into a more loyal individual to Shu He, then his so called doctor friend is. **********************************************************************************************************************Zi Ang on the other hand has gone crazy, the only thing (person) on his mind is Shu He, dude's obsessed. there weren't any lines he wasn't ready to cross just to have Shu He, now he will now destroy (his kingdom) everything he built & the whole country to keep Shu He. dude is possessed by the need to be with Shu He & given how he has him under house arrest & in shackle's, seems like he wants to dominate Shu He in every way possible. ****************************************************************************ironically after Zi Ang conquering his land & dethroning him even if Shu He wanted to be with Zi Ang his pride & conscience would allow him. so doubt his gonna have a happy ending. maybe i will be wrong -
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