
HeadInTheClouds:
It's the second one :-)
I haven't read the first one. Dealing with the google translate is going to be a challenge.
I've read the second one. It's a bit odd reading stories about these characters in English, to be honest. And I don't think the author managed to capture the character really well so it doesn't read like XL. Look at me critiquing fanfiction: "He's not XL enough to tempt me!" :-)
Such a late reply but I just read the second one. I agree with what you said. Honestly, everyone was out of character and XL didn't seem like himself at all.
I was in disbelief reading XY easily getting past those guards at the beginning. They let her through just like that? And her grandfather let her marry XL if he disguised himself as FFB and Cang Xuan didn't stop it?

Gosh, I'm so harsh critiquing fanfic lol (it's just my opinion ^^"). But it's nice to see more English fanfic writers for LYF :)
My favorite fanfic so far is still https://zhuanlan.zhihu.com/p/555723806
And I started to read this one, it's an AU with Xiao Yao (when she was still Xiao Liu) leaving days before Cang Xuan could capture her https://archiveofourown.org/works/49991599/chapters/126221257