Replying to KesRit • Sep 29, 2025
Title Revamp the Undead Story
It's just like a dish with too much cooks. It doesn't feel genuine and the pacing of the story is kinda odd. Also…
It's interesting to think that this one has the opposite problem to Khemjira(excessive slow burn): they got together too quickly, without leaving viewers in suspense about what was to come.
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