Replying to Pincolino • Mar 12, 2018
Title Together with Me
The chemistry is really, really great. For me that's enough reason to give this series 10/10. The story is weak…
I think I didn't explain very well what I don't like about typical fanfictions. I will try again: They focus too much on intimate scenes and emotions, while they are lacking when it comes to other things. The typical fanfiction writer is only interested in the emotional state of the charcters which many times is potrayed very cheesy and full of cliches (in Heroin/Addicted we have the possessive lover (cliche!) and even a rape scene - this novel is questionable for many reasons). The style of writing is also ... I don't know how to say it in English. It's trashy. The words they use ... I wonder if it's better in the original language. No idea.
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