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I get why he might be carrying a torch for her, but this is just some strange guy that fell into her world without a lot of emotional build-up and she doesn't seem like the rosy glasses fall in love at the drop of a hat romantic type. If it was curiosity on her part she would have reacted differently when he was touching on her and lifting her up on the horse (I would kill to see the unedited parts of that scene LOL). I'm not sure if a slower burn between the leads would make this better for me or just not the forcefulness of his approach. I get he's arrogant because he was bred to be, but the words are falling flat on modern ears. If this was a soap opera from 1980 the dialogue might fly but I expect much, much better from this writer. She gave us Goblin and Mr Sunshine which I loved.
I’m along for the ride wherever they are taking us.
Thanks for a very nice article! ♡
Thank you! I promise to go back and read the rest of the article after I’ve revived myself. :) (And I felt the same way after going to four stores to find basic necessities-perfect!)