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Totally true, which is why I said Mame doesn't write these things right.

You said: "It's not what he said but how he said it. He's right to want a responsible and successful lover, to want Rain to do better. I appreciate he has good intention and really likes Rain. However, his phrasing is once again condescending. Phayu decided by himself to stop seeing Rain and didn't acknowledge him. I mean, Rain behaves like a kid but he's still an adult, so he should be treated as such..."

The reason the way Phayu spoke might feel off, is because Mame is playing with D/s like she often does. Like someone said on youtube, it's' dom brat tamer' and 'sub brat' dynamics and they have been a bit kinky from the start. Mame does her own subtle, and sometimes off, interpretations of kinky subgenres, so they aren't always obvious to the viewer. Someone who is more knowledgeable about the subject can elaborate, since I'm not a member of that community.

Rain does have an air of hesitation and wonder hanging about him. Even with the scene where Phayu puts his arm around Rain to keep his brother away, Rain's facial expression looked like a mix of awe and hesitation, when he looks at Phayu.

Like people said, the storyline isn't new, but it might be the best MAME has done so far. I think it's been interesting enough to be fun to watch.

Rain: That guy is hot, wait what? I'm confused now.
Phayu: The way you are hitting on me, isn't very artfull, but I'm into you. Let's have some casual sex maybe?
Rain: I'm not into you, you lunatic.
Phayu: Well, that's an obvious lie, but I think you're cute, maybe we could have a more serious relationship. Let me show you how you clearly think I'm hot as hell.
Rain: Damn, I guess I do think you're sexy. Why are you so calm about this situation. I'm going to make you crazy too, see if I don't. I'll make you love me.
Phayu: Bring it on. It will only help you see how good we could be together. The bonus is, you won't even notice I'm chasing you, trying to make you fall for me, not the other way around.
Rain: This hitting on a guy stuff is difficult, also I like being around you. Well, damn.
Phayu: I like you. Do you even really realise how you feel about me? Can you be serious about me? We can't just play games that distract you to the point of you not doing your schoolwork. Maybe you should just leave me be.
Rain: Hell to the NO! I think I do want you. I guess I need to get my sh*t together. I won't be ignored.
Phayu: So we are doing this together thing then, that's great. Can we do something about this "I think you're sexy situation" we've got going on?
Rain: Yes, It's pretty great. Yes, might as well do something about that...I guess??? Yes. Yes. Yes!

The editing is kinda weird sometimes. It's not even very clear the final scene is always a flashback isn't it?
Flashbacks:
1. The one where Rain rolls into Phayu on the bed, and Phayu says I'm starting to like you.
2. The one at the race track, where Phayu calls someone to tell them to replace him for the race, so he can go catch Rain.
3. The one with Phayu being sent a picture saying Rain is an architecture student. So Phayu does know who Rain is.
4. The one where Rain sneaked into Phayu's bed to sleep during the day, and Phayu says: I'll wait until you are ready.

It doesn't have a new and innovative storyline, but a storyline isn't everything. Theory of Love had a storyline, and I was so bored I could've cried. This one is neither a bore, nor do you need to be crazy horny to watch it LOL.

His acting does seem a little uneven. I mean some less verbal scenes are really nice, better than ones with a lot of lines, I guess...I'm not saying the hot scenes that obviously have less lines are the only good ones😁.

Rain was mad at Phayu, because Rain had such a strong reaction to being around Phayu, but Rain felt that Phayu was just playing with him, that Phayu didn't have the same intense feelings for Rain. So Rain bit Phayu as if to say: You don't have all the power in this relationship, I'm not worth any less than you Phayu. That's why Rain also said, I'm going to make you fall in love with me.

I don't understand why some people think Phayu asking Rain to be responsible, was a problem. It was maybe way too grown up and reasonable to be a realistic scenario, but otherwise such an adult thing to do. It's surely draining to be in a relationship with a person, who isn't in charge of their own life or know what they want from you.

That kiss at the garage with the thank you from Phayu, was sweet and the beginning of them being more or less on the same page about how they feel about each other.

Yes

Lol, the comment does say off topic, meaning completely unrelated topic. You are free to ignore it.

Off topic: Queen of England Elizabeth II dies at 96, just now.

Episode 4 part 1 eng sub https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ddVDuviuYaQ

Official youtube channel for the show.

There's a count down clock above.

Phayu is such a baby Dom testing Rain.
-I don't like you using bad words Rain.
-I wan't you to be successfull Rain.
-How about a little reward for persisting Rain.
-Come to me Rain. (the hug)
-Good boy Rain.
I'm in charge of how you can reach me Rain. I'm in charge of ordering food Rain. I'm in Charge Rain.

Basically Phay is saying: Let me be in charge, TRUST ME RAIN.
And Rain is saying: I don't trust myself or you Phayu, not yet.

Edit. The way Phayu is so sarcastic towards Rain isn't working for me in this context. It reads too mean.

P.S. That spanking didn't really flow with the story. 🙄😂
As always, I'm a little worried, since in principal there should be concent in D/s also, and this is MAME who is writing. She doesn't seem to be a kink expert, but then neither am I 😃.

Load more comments, people talk about that quite a lot.

You don't even realise right out of the gate, you started off douchey... okay, bye!

LOL at people obsessing over Boss. He really does have a presence about him. Another one that has that, even stronger I think, is Jeff Satur from Kinnporsche. I mean, people can be crazy good looking and still not have that extra charm about them that just draws you in. I have to admit, I'm really enjoying watching Boss in this show.

😀 ...and screeching about things being "FICTION" really endears you to people, I'm sure.

Criticising things that you don't like is to be expected, and is as normal as criticising things that you do like. How is this hard to comprehend...

Realising the issues is indeed important, and it's concerning and saddening that there are people who might not.