ok. It's fine. we've seen more unreasonable people like you so it's ok to be Dumb sometimes. Pushing your disgusting…
I don't think Him going to her school is a problem at all and it doesn't even mean He has ulterior motives. It's like a Younger kid approaching me to help her go meet the teacher in place of a "brother" or sister. Because they don't want the brother knowing because they've gotten into too much trouble already and would be scolded. At first we know She had pleaded with him to come and he refused but at some point he feels bad for the "kid" and reluctantly goes as a brother and even acts like one with the teacher there. so Honestly don't see a problem here. The brother of SangZhi didn't want him to go because he wants her to get into trouble and stuff ( Brother sister Chaotic moment) I honestly don't see a problem with him going. like does it mean that agreeing to go in place of a brother or so for a kid who the teacher calls in for an elder means YOU LIKE THE KID or have ulterior motives?? If this is what the society think then they're being too Odd in views because nothing wrong
I'd be interested to read your analyse because I was confused by episode 1.Maybe I missed some steps, but I feel…
Omg You write?? Well I don't do screenplay yet .( I have a dream of doing so when I grow and do it for a Kdrama or Cdrama. but still 18( almost 19) and working on my Contemporary inspired Chinese novel to be debuted this Year
Analysis of ep1 as per writing (Decided to share since someone asked me below the comments)
The beginning is a witty way to grasp the viewer like it did with me. starts off confusing, although I wasn't confused lol. but starts of with them showing the THAT moment which was their lowed point of life . That moment where everything begins crumbling that SLUMP moment at its peak. and we see FL getting sick and all and we see ML losing a patient ( I already know that It was ML doing surgery, I can see His eyes haha) But was confused for awhile if FL was on the surgery bed? but later knew it wasn't her. But this is all what the drama wants to show you. It's basically The Hook first scene. like getting you curious like what's happening? and with that question you'd so want to know. Imagine starting off the drama with FL getting up and getting ready and meeting family blah blah, I'd obviously go ok well ..You see nothing much to get you going for more. But with what they gave in ep1 beginning you'd certainly want to know what is happening because at this point you're confused.
But what they did was basically starting off the show in a Poetic manner but giving you an incident to question about and care. and then they take you back to the old day's to tell you. ok this is where it all began. and telling you this is what our leads were like and WHY you should care about them. in my opinion was a Smart transition ( I use it in my writing lol) So now seeing their past it gets you More Curious and you're like. ok so why did this happen later on? you see....gets you through more minutes to know. it's always good for that in first EP. an a Intriguing way to introduce character. but what they did I appreciate was Not making their flashback too long like last a whole EP. I'd be boring because people obviously want to know what's happening currently so they made it snappy. ( and we see along EPs and times they sprinkle some bits of their past when needed to make us know more. because I watched a writing couch video where the person says Flashback are boring but GOOD when the audience needs to know what's happening. Like saying. You made the FL do something and the audience are like...ah..this is so not her why did she do this??. at this point you Throw in the Flashback and the audience go ..Ohh now I see. That's how you do flashback and that's what this drama actually using and I like) So after a snappy Flashback we're back to our leads in future and How their lives are taking a turn after that apparent Flashback and giving us more flash of what they're going through Before that incident at beginning of ep1. So building up the flash of the tale up to how that beginning came about and What they were going through before we get to their slump life at it's peak. So basically the ending was ML Moving into FL rooftop after escaping from his problem and FL gets home and sees family chatting, she doesn't want to go in so she goes up to rooftop obviously for some fresh air and there meets our ML who has apparently moved in as a tenant. ( this is Spoiler from Ep2)
So overall I feel the 1st EP is a strong introduction to ingredients we need for this show. we got the characters story and understanding of them and we got to know how they got into their Slump and builds up more Curiousity as to what decision to take which leads to ep2
I'd be interested to read your analyse because I was confused by episode 1.Maybe I missed some steps, but I feel…
The beginning is a witty way to grasp the viewer like it did with me. starts off confusing, although I wasn't confused lol. but starts of with them showing the THAT moment which was their lowed point of life . That moment where everything begins crumbling that SLUMP moment at its peak. and we see FL getting sick and all and we see ML losing a patient ( I already know that It was ML doing surgery, I can see His eyes haha) But was confused for awhile if FL was on the surgery bed? but later knew it wasn't her. But this is all what the drama wants to show you. It's basically The Hook first scene. like getting you curious like what's happening? and with that question you'd so want to know. Imagine starting off the drama with FL getting up and getting ready and meeting family blah blah, I'd obviously go ok well ..You see nothing much to get you going for more. But with what they gave in ep1 beginning you'd certainly want to know what is happening because at this point you're confused.
But what they did was basically starting off the show in a Poetic manner but giving you an incident to question about and care. and then they take you back to the old day's to tell you. ok this is where it all began. and telling you this is what our leads were like and WHY you should care about them. in my opinion was a Smart transition ( I use it in my writing lol) So now seeing their past it gets you More Curious and you're like. ok so why did this happen later on? you see....gets you through more minutes to know. it's always good for that in first EP. an a Intriguing way to introduce character. but what they did I appreciate was Not making their flashback too long like last a whole EP. I'd be boring because people obviously want to know what's happening currently so they made it snappy. ( and we see along EPs and times they sprinkle some bits of their past when needed to make us know more. because I watched a writing couch video where the person says Flashback are boring but GOOD when the audience needs to know what's happening. Like saying. You made the FL do something and the audience are like...ah..this is so not her why did she do this??. at this point you Throw in the Flashback and the audience go ..Ohh now I see. That's how you do flashback and that's what this drama actually using and I like) So after a snappy Flashback we're back to our leads in future and How their lives are taking a turn after that apparent Flashback and giving us more flash of what they're going through Before that incident at beginning of ep1. So building up the flash of the tale up to how that beginning came about and What they were going through before we get to their slump life at it's peak. So basically the ending was ML Moving into FL rooftop after escaping from his problem and FL gets home and sees family chatting, she doesn't want to go in so she goes up to rooftop obviously for some fresh air and there meets our ML who has apparently moved in as a tenant. ( this is Spoiler from Ep2)
So overall I feel the 1st EP is a strong introduction to ingredients we need for this show. we got the characters story and understanding of them and we got to know how they got into their Slump and builds up more Curiousity as to what decision to take which leads to ep2
Done with 2 eps and I analyzed the 1st ep which I found SOLID for a start. It had the internal conflicts which makes you understand the characters and what they want and can't get because of this or that. and that's what makes you CARE about them. they did that well here. And further we get the Inciting incident, Basically what throws the characters out of their comfort zone into facing that Which they fear and making them go on about should we accept or shouldn't. hmm it has it has that's Great for Making you care about this characters more considering their Story from the internal conflict haha. And we also get the hook. Which is all nicely done in 2 EPs. hehe can't wait for more of how this goes because I hope it goes Well.
( Hehe I'm writing a book so I'm forced of analyze what I watch to see where These core writing themes fall lol)
No offense I have liked both of them for so long ,But why do i feel their dialogues so un natural and cringy in…
Hmm I didn't feel that way Maybe I think it depends on taste and what you'd consider real or so. Because I for one found their dialogue fitting for their characters like consider their past and Dynamic and all. So I liked it. so overall I think it's what your definition of Realistic is
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Hmm I don't think you understand the purpose of this drama. it's not a PATRIOTIC doctor drama that advertise hospital and advise you on what to study as one. It's clear in the Synopsis what to expect tho. So go watch something else and I hope you didn't slump your exam dearðŸ˜ðŸ˜
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But what they did was basically starting off the show in a Poetic manner but giving you an incident to question about and care. and then they take you back to the old day's to tell you. ok this is where it all began. and telling you this is what our leads were like and WHY you should care about them. in my opinion was a Smart transition ( I use it in my writing lol) So now seeing their past it gets you More Curious and you're like. ok so why did this happen later on? you see....gets you through more minutes to know. it's always good for that in first EP. an a Intriguing way to introduce character. but what they did I appreciate was Not making their flashback too long like last a whole EP. I'd be boring because people obviously want to know what's happening currently so they made it snappy. ( and we see along EPs and times they sprinkle some bits of their past when needed to make us know more. because I watched a writing couch video where the person says Flashback are boring but GOOD when the audience needs to know what's happening. Like saying. You made the FL do something and the audience are like...ah..this is so not her why did she do this??. at this point you Throw in the Flashback and the audience go ..Ohh now I see. That's how you do flashback and that's what this drama actually using and I like) So after a snappy Flashback we're back to our leads in future and How their lives are taking a turn after that apparent Flashback and giving us more flash of what they're going through Before that incident at beginning of ep1. So building up the flash of the tale up to how that beginning came about and What they were going through before we get to their slump life at it's peak.
So basically the ending was ML Moving into FL rooftop after escaping from his problem and FL gets home and sees family chatting, she doesn't want to go in so she goes up to rooftop obviously for some fresh air and there meets our ML who has apparently moved in as a tenant. ( this is Spoiler from Ep2)
So overall I feel the 1st EP is a strong introduction to ingredients we need for this show. we got the characters story and understanding of them and we got to know how they got into their Slump and builds up more Curiousity as to what decision to take which leads to ep2
But what they did was basically starting off the show in a Poetic manner but giving you an incident to question about and care. and then they take you back to the old day's to tell you. ok this is where it all began. and telling you this is what our leads were like and WHY you should care about them. in my opinion was a Smart transition ( I use it in my writing lol) So now seeing their past it gets you More Curious and you're like. ok so why did this happen later on? you see....gets you through more minutes to know. it's always good for that in first EP. an a Intriguing way to introduce character. but what they did I appreciate was Not making their flashback too long like last a whole EP. I'd be boring because people obviously want to know what's happening currently so they made it snappy. ( and we see along EPs and times they sprinkle some bits of their past when needed to make us know more. because I watched a writing couch video where the person says Flashback are boring but GOOD when the audience needs to know what's happening. Like saying. You made the FL do something and the audience are like...ah..this is so not her why did she do this??. at this point you Throw in the Flashback and the audience go ..Ohh now I see. That's how you do flashback and that's what this drama actually using and I like) So after a snappy Flashback we're back to our leads in future and How their lives are taking a turn after that apparent Flashback and giving us more flash of what they're going through Before that incident at beginning of ep1. So building up the flash of the tale up to how that beginning came about and What they were going through before we get to their slump life at it's peak.
So basically the ending was ML Moving into FL rooftop after escaping from his problem and FL gets home and sees family chatting, she doesn't want to go in so she goes up to rooftop obviously for some fresh air and there meets our ML who has apparently moved in as a tenant. ( this is Spoiler from Ep2)
So overall I feel the 1st EP is a strong introduction to ingredients we need for this show. we got the characters story and understanding of them and we got to know how they got into their Slump and builds up more Curiousity as to what decision to take which leads to ep2
And we also get the hook. Which is all nicely done in 2 EPs. hehe can't wait for more of how this goes because I hope it goes Well.
( Hehe I'm writing a book so I'm forced of analyze what I watch to see where These core writing themes fall lol)