This chick is a terrible writer. Lol she doesn't do her own. Research at all. If it weren't for the ML, I wonder what she would do. Still, this is a fun little short series. I'm enjoying it.
FL met her match with main villain. That's because she thinks she smarter than all of the characters.
Imma need China to do two things for me, cause I'm really really sick of this.
1. Stop with the childhood connection. Not EVERY couple needs to have a childhood past.
2. Make FL bark equal to their bites. Sick of these women who talk tough, but cower, needing to be rescued. Not bold or smart enough when the character isn't their love interest. They get their wrist grabbed or maid threatened and they fold like cheap Temu lawn chairs. Give me Boss Chicks, if you will. Women who not only write checks, but their fists and feet can cash them.
I actually prefer when someone asks you why you don't like them or whatever, that ppl are straightforward. instead of saying "We just need to go our separate ways and have nothing more to do with each other." Say "i broke up with your cheating ass because I caught you with another woman." Or whatever the reason is for why you wanted to part ways. This gives the other person to address the accusation and clear up misunderstandings if there are any. It gives the other person and yourself the decency of being honest. and it shows that you are fearless and stand your ground.
By that same token, tell ppl the truth when they're life is in danger, that way, you shouldn't have to worry about them being troublesome just because they think you want to control them when all you want to do is protect them.
But that requires having adult conversations and mature writing.
1. The brother thought he was staring at the mailbox as if he had hid a bomb or something in it. He paused because…
Yeah, I couldn't help but laugh thinking about the whole "smell" aspect. It reminded me of Twilight. And I was like " girl, you've got to change your perfume, soap or shampoo. Something. You have two crazy men trying to claim you over your scent. " 😂
1. The brother thought he was staring at the mailbox as if he had hid a bomb or something in it. He paused because…
Even that took entirely too long. He still should have someone get his sister out of the way if the guy is a suspected murder. Was dumb on his part to bring her to the scene in the first place. And even after they opened the mailbox, because I watched all of that, it still took him forever to get the guy into the car. The man had time to continue to stare at her over his shoulder.
Everybody else parted like the red sea, but she stood there. So, I get it, they want us to see just how drawn they are to each other.
And say it was a bomb in the mailbox, the way they opened it could have killed everyone because what if opening the door was the trigger?
That whole scene was just silly, but I'm still curious to see where it's going.
is the fl as dumb as in the trailer and the first episode
Apparently, we have to wait until Ep6 for her to not be stupid anymore. Of course, I'm only on ep. 1 now and already enjoying the production value and the storyline is intriguing. But this girl just doesn't have survival instincts at all. Run, damn girl, Run.
She reminds me of the girl in Thriller video when MJ tells her to run, but she won't and keeps asking if he's okay. And even after he starts wolfing out, she just stands there screaming until he's practically fully transformed. lol
So, we're not going to put him in the police car? We're just going to stand there with him handcuffed in front of the girl too silly to move and let them stare at each other? is this the protocol? LOL.
This looks interesting like some dark, chaotic mess and I'm intrigued.
Go sit down somewhere, please. Because what I'm talking about is lazy writing and character development as it happens all too often in far too many shows and movies to pretend otherwise. Don't come at me with lame excuses about her being pregnant as she was dressing that way BEFORE her pregnancy. This is done to create a contrast between characters that supposed to prove that the female is plain, sweet, and simple. It screams lack of imagination.
Look at how they dress the other female actresses who are supposed to come off as bosses or sassy. But not Miss Girl Friday. It would be more interesting to do the opposite of what all the other writers are doing to add uniqueness. Her character's personality is already run of the mill for the most part and the series has its overused cliches. I'm trying to see if it gets better because I do give things a chance.
when does she start dressing like the poster, because her ass looks like a nun in every scene. bland clothes that she wears in layers. Ep. 3 has her looking like Sister Agatha from the Abernathy Catholic Church.
Why do writers, directions, and wardrobe, whoever else is responsible think that a woman can't be silly, charming, kindhearted, or even gullible and NOT have a killer fashion sense? Same for men. I know you're trying to do an opposite attract where the guy is a sharp dresser and the woman isn't. But that's just lazy writing and character development.
Why is she ALWAYS trying to be nice to this woman who is always mean to her. So what is she's one of your in laws. Girl, if you don't stop trying to be the Goddess of friendship and Mercy.
And if he can't turn his brother in then he needs to stand out of the way of others who can. He's being selfish. It's all about what he can't lose, never mind the thousands of soldiers who are brothers, husbands, fathers, sons who will die if war breaks out over his brother. Like what, their families lost don't matter? This is what's wrong with these "Hero" types.
They are always willing to sacrifice ppl who aren't a part of their inner circle and then have the nerve to call themselves the good guys.
I think the whole thing was not thought out well enough. Ok she asked him why he hated her and he didnt reply,…
Exactly. She's been with him that long and NOW she wants to investigate him. I can see why he developed feelings even if it seems like a sick obsession on his part. And while investigating, she acts like her lies are logical. Oh, the lights went out in the house so to look for candles she decides to search in his office? Why not the kitchen or storage?
And does she really think he has no idea that she's been looking for info when he's found her in his office twice and she claimed she was looking for a book to read. Just the dumbest excuses that makes me doubt the intelligence they claim the character had enough to be a lawyer.
He could have ended Fu, but he wanted to brag and play games. All he had to do was fill him full of lead when he was in the car. Or one head shot and done. But Nooooo, he wanted him to step out of the car, get down on his knees, have a conversation, gloat and that's how he lost control. Now he deserves what comes next because it's obvious he isn't dead.
I figured they would drag out that guy's death and would have the leads do something very stupid in order to allow him the escape.
And what did that woman think was going to happen when she went back to her father after her brother died? She should have stayed her ass at home with her husband.
I shame wardrobe didn't keep up with how often the actors would wear the same clothes. In every scene even as days past, they're wearing the same clothes.
A hostile takeover is what her dad did to his dad 12 years ago and if that old man was the breadwinner for his family, he should have thought about that before attempting to ruin that man's business. But here comes the FL acting like a saintess trying to convince the ML to just let it go. The series is trying to make it seem like she's the good guy when her antics don't sell me on that. She snatched a pen out of his hand in their first meeting then told him to give it to her. Got mad that he didn't just give her what she demanded and lied about him "Stealing" it when it was the other way around. Then she accused him of murder without evidence. Blackmailed him by threatening to ruin his reputation if he didn't comply. She violates his privacy by spying on him and looking through his things. She'd be outraged if he did that to her. Had it been me, her ass would be on latrine duty.
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FL met her match with main villain. That's because she thinks she smarter than all of the characters.
1. Stop with the childhood connection. Not EVERY couple needs to have a childhood past.
2. Make FL bark equal to their bites. Sick of these women who talk tough, but cower, needing to be rescued. Not bold or smart enough when the character isn't their love interest. They get their wrist grabbed or maid threatened and they fold like cheap Temu lawn chairs. Give me Boss Chicks, if you will. Women who not only write checks, but their fists and feet can cash them.
By that same token, tell ppl the truth when they're life is in danger, that way, you shouldn't have to worry about them being troublesome just because they think you want to control them when all you want to do is protect them.
But that requires having adult conversations and mature writing.
Everybody else parted like the red sea, but she stood there. So, I get it, they want us to see just how drawn they are to each other.
And say it was a bomb in the mailbox, the way they opened it could have killed everyone because what if opening the door was the trigger?
That whole scene was just silly, but I'm still curious to see where it's going.
She reminds me of the girl in Thriller video when MJ tells her to run, but she won't and keeps asking if he's okay. And even after he starts wolfing out, she just stands there screaming until he's practically fully transformed. lol
This looks interesting like some dark, chaotic mess and I'm intrigued.
Look at how they dress the other female actresses who are supposed to come off as bosses or sassy. But not Miss Girl Friday. It would be more interesting to do the opposite of what all the other writers are doing to add uniqueness. Her character's personality is already run of the mill for the most part and the series has its overused cliches. I'm trying to see if it gets better because I do give things a chance.
Why do writers, directions, and wardrobe, whoever else is responsible think that a woman can't be silly, charming, kindhearted, or even gullible and NOT have a killer fashion sense? Same for men. I know you're trying to do an opposite attract where the guy is a sharp dresser and the woman isn't. But that's just lazy writing and character development.
And if he can't turn his brother in then he needs to stand out of the way of others who can. He's being selfish. It's all about what he can't lose, never mind the thousands of soldiers who are brothers, husbands, fathers, sons who will die if war breaks out over his brother. Like what, their families lost don't matter? This is what's wrong with these "Hero" types.
They are always willing to sacrifice ppl who aren't a part of their inner circle and then have the nerve to call themselves the good guys.
And does she really think he has no idea that she's been looking for info when he's found her in his office twice and she claimed she was looking for a book to read. Just the dumbest excuses that makes me doubt the intelligence they claim the character had enough to be a lawyer.
I figured they would drag out that guy's death and would have the leads do something very stupid in order to allow him the escape.
And what did that woman think was going to happen when she went back to her father after her brother died? She should have stayed her ass at home with her husband.