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A Happy Businesswoman
https://archive.org/details/dead-end-run-2003-sogo-ishii
(As of now, still a legal site)
One concern with this version is that when the children performed their song it was muted for YouTube.
Something all writers need to do when they use time travel is to establish the rules their world will use throughout a drama/film/book and stick with them or else the audience will invariably ask, โWhat about?โ Time travel makes my head hurt anyway and I have watched my fair share of them. My husband will always pipe up, โYou know they canโt correct the timeline, they are just creating a new one each time.โ ๐
Despite some issues I had with the narrative I was engrossed in this drama and was going to rate it higher. Then the rewinding hit and how much they could torture LWY physically. The writing mantra could have been The Princess Brideโs โto the pain!โ
The ending was bent to fit the writerโs goal and the audience was just expected to accept it or fill in the blanks themselves. I thought he did that in other places as well which pulled me out of the story.
It was frustrating because I enjoyed the characters and felt like the potential of the story was missed.
The minute they said he was the new dragon his part dissipated. Ji even had to rescue him at the end. The tortured lovers went rapidly from "hi, nice to meet you" to "I would die for you. At least 30 or more times." It got to the point it felt like the writer was going, what I haven't I done to LWY yet? Stab, burn, kill, cut off her tail...
Tyvm for the ๐ธ